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Behind the Sofa

July 9, 2019 by Phil Town 20 Comments

Behind The Sofa

Alice sank down into the deep-red, velvety, cotton-wool-comfy sofa. On a small table to her side were all the necessary provisions for an evening’s TV viewing: a bottle of Pinot Noir, some nuts, some chocolate, and a large box of popcorn.

Bernard was away at a conference for the weekend; he had his work to do and his hoped-for promotion to cultivate. He was a stickler for being active and ‘doing’ stuff, so this was Alice’s chance to be self-indulgent for once.

She sighed with pleasure at the prospect of doing nothing much at all and felt the stress ease out of her body, a stress caused by their recent move and a certain tension that had built up between her and Bernard. She shook her head now as she remembered the petty source of the tension: the sofa itself.

The house was rented unfurnished, but when they arrived with all their own furniture, there it was, pushed up against the main wall of the living room. Bernard had been furious and was about to call the estate agent, but once Alice had tried it out, she knew it must stay and she convinced Bernard to keep it.

As the days passed, though, Alice became more and more attached to the sofa. Bernard would come home and she’d be languishing in its downiness. Meanwhile, things weren’t getting done around the house, and there’d be rows. Bernard would argue that he was the breadwinner and her job was to keep house. Alice would retort that she’d given up her own job to come to this new town, so he should really cut her some slack.

Just before he left on his trip there’d been a humdinger of an argument, and what amounted to an ultimatum from him: either the sofa went or … Alice didn’t believe it would come to that, but it gave her food for thought; she really did love him, and she didn’t want anything to get in the way of it.

She put the bad feeling to the back of her mind now; Casablanca was coming on soon. Snuggled down, she took a sip of wine and prepared to drift into the film’s familiar charm again. Then the phone rang.

Alice leaned over to get it but the cushion on the sofa gave way slightly, her elbow slipped, and she knocked the phone off the table.

Still ringing, the phone skidded over the parquet flooring and Alice had to get up to retrieve it. It took her three goes to extricate herself from the sofa’s deep softness but she finally reached the phone.

“What took you so long?” Bernard’s voice sounded only half-joking.

Alice returned to the sofa and resumed her former position.

“My lover wouldn’t let me get up …”

“Ha ha. So … missing me?” Bernard’s now-mellow voice sent warm vibrations through Alice’s supine body.

“As much as you must be missing me,” she answered, putting as much sensuality into her voice as she could while absentmindedly twirling her wedding ring around her finger with her thumb.

“What are you wearing?” asked Bernard. They laughed at the cliché, but it triggered some blissful minutes of long-distance love-making, Alice feeling the velvety smoothness of the sofa against her skin as she moved to Bernard’s prompting.

“I love you,” Bernard whispered eventually.

“I love you too,” Alice sighed.

Bernard paused to bring things back to earth.

“Alice … I have to … you know, what we were talking about yesterday…”

“What?”

“The sofa. I’m sorry, but it really has to go. You like it, I understand that. I bet you’re on it now, aren’t you? But it’s too big, much too big. And it doesn’t go with the room. And … well, we’ve got a perfectly good one in storage – the one my parents gave us, remember? They’re really offended that we’re not using it.”

Softened up by the last few minutes, Alice stroked the cover of the sofa, already regretting what she was about to say.

“It’s such a shame, but … if you say so, I suppo–”

A loud creak stopped her dead.

“Hang on,” she blurted down the phone. “What was that?”

“What was what?”

“That creaking sound?”

“Not this end.”

“Oh, it must have been the telly.”

The volume on the TV was off, but Alice didn’t want to worry Bernard unduly.

“Yeah? Okay, but don’t you go watching any horror films without me. You know how scared you get.”

They both laughed and finished their conversation, professing their mutual love again before hanging up.

Alice got to her feet and walked around the dimly-lit room, inspecting the furniture to see if she could discover where the creaking sound had come from. Finally, concluding that she’d imagined it, she lay back down to watch the film. With her right hand cradling her head, and her left arm slung along the top of the sofa, she was fast asleep well before Ilsa swept back into Rick’s life.

A shrill scream yanked Alice back to consciousness. Casablanca had finished, replaced by some cheap 1960s horror film. Unsettled and disoriented, she went to sit up, but her left hand was stuck in the narrow gap between the wall and the sofa.

She tugged hard, and as she pulled her hand out, she felt her wedding ring slip off and fall behind the sofa, making a light tinkling sound as it hit the floor.

“Bugger it!” she muttered, still half asleep.

Swinging her legs round, she got shakily to her feet, standing for a few moments to clear her head.

After moving the table with the provisions on it to the middle of the floor, Alice first went to the right-hand end of the sofa and tried to pull it back from the wall, but it wouldn’t budge. The left-hand end was not much easier, but she was able to heave it out by a foot or so, the wooden feet of the sofa grinding on the parquet flooring, before it stuck and would move no more.

The wedge-shaped space that the back of the sofa formed with the wall was the deepest, densest black. Alice had half-turned to go to the main light switch when she caught a glint on the floor. Not thinking twice – and not questioning how anything could reflect light in such fathomless gloom – she got on her hands and knees and stretched an arm into the space.

Unable to reach the source of the light at the first try, she readjusted her body so that she could get a little further into the gap. She edged along on her side with the wall at her back, and at her chest, the back of the sofa, punctuated by sturdy, vertical wooden struts covered with the same soft material as on the front.

She breathed in to make herself thinner still and inched forward into the space. With one final effort and stretching every sinew, she managed to touch the ring, only to nudge it a little further out of reach. Then she heard the creak, the same sound she’d heard earlier – very loud now, almost deafening in the confined space.

The creak again, then the sudden grinding noise of sofa-feet on parquet flooring, coinciding with the pain in her chest. Now she was awake to the danger. She was still facing the black angle but the glint of the ring had disappeared.

She made an effort to scuffle backwards but her torso was wedged between the wall and the wooden struts on the back of the sofa. She tried breathing out to make herself thinner, but another deep, groaning noise signalled more movement from the sofa, jamming her head in place.

She let out a desperate scream, echoing those still coming from the television; filling her lungs to do it cut through her like a thousand knives. The last thing she felt before slipping into unconsciousness was the soft, velvety covering on the back of the sofa, caressing her face.

Alice was spared the terrible cacophony of sounds that followed: the shrieks and screams from the television; the relentless grinding of wood on wood; the crunching and snapping of bones; the popping of organs; and the long, sonorous, mournful creaking.

Filed Under: Horror

About Phil Town

Phil is a teacher (of English as a foreign language) and translator (Portuguese > English) in Lisbon. In his spare time he writes screenplays (features and shorts) and short stories; he’s a regular contributor to Short Fiction Break. He also writes about Portuguese football (soccer) for the British independent football magazine When Saturday Comes.

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Comments

  1. Raghu says

    July 9, 2019 at 10:09 am

    So bizzare! Unless one goes out and gets some fresh air….

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 10, 2019 at 5:45 am

      Thanks for the read, Raghu!

      Reply
  2. Dawn says

    July 9, 2019 at 10:42 am

    This story held its suspense from beginning to end! Beautifully written as I found myself hating that couch ! I am not a lover of stories like these; full of suspense and horrific and I will admit if it were a novel I would have put it down already.
    Saying that, it is a huge compliment to this story because of its dramatic contents. Thank you for a great read!

    Dawn H.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 10, 2019 at 5:52 am

      Thank YOU, Dawn, for the read and the comment. Glad that you got something out of it, even if it’s not your preferred genre.

      Reply
  3. Phyllis Brandano says

    July 9, 2019 at 11:03 am

    Hey Phil,
    This was a compellingly strange story. I love the flow of language and how the story draws you in. I’d like to see another ending, though. One that could be tied into Bernard and Alice’s relationship since much of the story is framed by that. Maybe a twist can be created involving your ending but bringing Bernard in, too. Just a thought. Thanks for sharing.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 10, 2019 at 5:54 am

      Thanks, Phyllis! Yes, it could have ended in various different ways, but I kind of like the idea of the shock that Bernard (not a very pleasant character) is going to get …

      Reply
  4. Cathy Ryan says

    July 9, 2019 at 12:39 pm

    Well done, Phil! What a vengeful piece of furniture. Alice didn’t even actually agree to let it go, but it knew where she was going and stopped her – dead. Don’t suppose Bernard will keep the house now, hmm?
    Good story. I enjoyed it very much.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 10, 2019 at 5:56 am

      Thanks, Cathy! A ‘vengeful piece of furniture’ indeed! Don’t know about the house, but the sofa’s toast!

      Reply
  5. dorothy h. turner says

    July 9, 2019 at 2:22 pm

    OH,MY! This story was a surprise,.
    l was in process of rushing through scheduled routine daily E-mail list clearing, when decided to take that literary break as your email suggested,…and WOW! Glad I did….
    what a neat distraction from the hum-drum list of activities l was involved with…Being a believer in happy endings, and challenged to make them either mystical, or at least believable., always wanting to leave the reader with a heart-smile….Was intrigued with this well written glimpse into the lives of this frustrated couple coping with the eclectic appearance of their living room…building it out of proportion to such an extreme issue….yet allowing the reader to appreciate their individual thoughts while working out a compromised solution….when “WHAMO!”….Poor Bernard……….Look forward to reading more of your work…..SHL

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 10, 2019 at 6:00 am

      Thanks very much, Dorothy! ‘Poor Bernard’ … not sure. He’s selfish and chauvinistic, so maybe it serves him right? (But poor Alice, yes!)

      Reply
  6. Diane Turner says

    July 9, 2019 at 4:34 pm

    Wow, Phil. The Killer Couch! I always enjoy your work, and this story was oh so satisfying.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 10, 2019 at 6:01 am

      Haha – ‘Killer Couch’. Thanks for the kind words, Diane.

      Reply
  7. Herbert says

    July 9, 2019 at 6:13 pm

    Well done. Had me fixed to the end.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 10, 2019 at 6:02 am

      Thank YOU for reading and taking the time to comment, Herbert.

      Reply
  8. Evelyn says

    July 10, 2019 at 4:31 am

    It was an oil heater that listed through our wooden floor. Much less dramatic and no injuries except to my wallet.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 10, 2019 at 6:02 am

      Oh dear!

      Reply
  9. Ayesha Harben says

    July 11, 2019 at 12:22 am

    What an awful sofa! So utterly comfortable, yet unutterably wicked! No wonder the owners of the house left that one piece of furniture in that unfurnished house! Wonder if they tried getting it out. Great story Phil.

    One sentence to query though: ” ….she went to sit up…”

    Thanks for sharing the story.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 11, 2019 at 4:02 am

      Thanks, Ayesha! Yes, I wouldn’t want to get on the wrong side of THAT piece of furniture …

      (I think ‘went to sit up’ is ok, actually. It means intending to do something but being prevented for some reason. Another example: ‘I went to pay the bill but found that I’d left my wallet at home.’)

      Reply
  10. Rick says

    July 15, 2019 at 1:47 pm

    A well constructed short story with an abrupt surprise ending. It leaves the reader wondering and forming their own conclusions about Bernard’s reaction when he returned home.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      July 16, 2019 at 5:13 am

      Thanks very much for that, Rick.

      Yes – I’d hope that he would blame himself a bit, besides the sofa.

      Reply

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