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ARTIFICIALLY INTELLIGENT

December 20, 2021 by Phil Town 19 Comments

Artificially Intelligent

Pamela stormed into the living room, where George was lying on the sofa reading a science magazine.

“You’re an idiot!” Pamela stood over her husband, hands on hips, red in the face.

George dropped the magazine.

“What?!”

“A blithering idiot.”

“What are you talking about?”

“At the Idiots’ Olympics, you’d come away with gold in all events.”

George jumped up from the sofa. “I  . . . I’m an ‘idiot,’ you think?!”

“Big time!”

“Well, I don’t know what’s brought this on, but just . . . just let me remind you . . .”

Pamela rolled her eyes.

“Here we go.”

“Yes, here we go. I got five A-levels at school—all A-stars. Five! How many did you get?”

“I know.”

Pamela left the living room, George on her heels.

“A first from Oxford! What did you get?”

“Yes, but—”

“A Masters, with distinction! Have you got a Masters?”

George followed Pamela down the hallway and with each qualification, he jabbed a finger at her back.

“No, you know I haven’t.”

“Oh. So you haven’t got a Masters either?”

They were in the kitchen now. Pamela glared at her husband before opening the fridge and peering in. A large turkey took up most of the space.

“A doctorate! I’ve got a bloody doctorate!” George was still jabbing.

Pamela closed the fridge door and moved to the cupboards, pulling out packets and boxes, taking a quick look and putting them back again.

George moved between his wife and the cupboards.

“A post-doctorate, for God’s sake!” His voice had risen to a crescendo. He stood waiting for the barrage of bragging to take full effect, a grotesquely twisted smirk on his face.

Pamela took a deep breath and measured her words.

“I know all of this—you remind me of it often enough.”

“Then what’s all that talk about me being an ‘idiot’?”  George lowered his voice now, more in line with Pamela’s, but the words hissed through his tightly-clenched teeth.

“Of course you’re brilliant . . .” Pamela paused for effect, then did her own jabbing for each syllable of: “A-CA-DEM-IC-AL-LY.”

A counter-attack? George’s smirk froze on his face.

“You bright . . . spark.” It was Pamela who was smirking now. “You had one job, and one job only. It was a simple job. A job a monkey could do.”

George took a step back as Pamela leaned in.

“A job an amoeba could do!”

George flinched.

“To pay the bloody gas bill on time!”

A look of awful realization spread across George’s face.

“I . . . yes, well . . . it’s . . .”

“Idiot,” Pamela muttered under her breath as she turned on her heel and stalked out of the kitchen, leaving George to contemplate the usefulness of a post-doctorate in statistical mechanics while Christmas dinner sat uncooked in the fridge.

Filed Under: Holidays

About Phil Town

Phil is a teacher (of English as a foreign language) and translator (Portuguese > English) in Lisbon. In his spare time he writes screenplays (features and shorts) and short stories; he’s a regular contributor to Short Fiction Break. He also writes about Portuguese football (soccer) for the British independent football magazine When Saturday Comes.

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Comments

  1. Victoria Lorrekovich-Miller says

    December 20, 2021 at 2:22 pm

    Phil,

    That was a fantastic story and very timely–loved it!

    Reply
    • Philip Town says

      January 2, 2022 at 9:18 pm

      Thanks, Victoria! (My response not so timely – sorry!)

      Reply
  2. Steve Martinson says

    December 20, 2021 at 2:33 pm

    Loved it! It’s great to see know-it-alls, get taken down a peg or two!

    Reply
    • Philip Town says

      January 2, 2022 at 9:18 pm

      Thanks, Steve. I agree!

      Reply
  3. Mike+Van+Horn says

    December 20, 2021 at 2:44 pm

    Hey I resemble this! We smart men have to handle all the big jobs–world peace, politics, global warming. All you women have to do is stay on top of the little things–handle the money, raise the kids, take care of the house. Sheesh. Say, if you’re up would you get me a beer?

    Reply
    • Philip Town says

      January 2, 2022 at 9:20 pm

      Me too, Mike, unfortunately (re resemblance). Not AS awful, though, I hope. And I’m working on it!

      Reply
    • Rufaydah Ojugbele says

      January 7, 2022 at 10:55 am

      That’s extremely unreasonable in assuming that only men handle all the big jobs and also in assuming the the things you listed women do is easy. Watch your words.

      Reply
      • Philip Town says

        January 7, 2022 at 12:15 pm

        I’m sure Mike was being ironic, Rufaydah, and didn’t intend to offend.

        Reply
  4. deborah says

    December 20, 2021 at 9:21 pm

    Just wonderful !!

    Reply
    • Philip Town says

      January 2, 2022 at 9:21 pm

      Thanks very much, Deborah!

      Reply
  5. Trudi Griffin says

    December 21, 2021 at 12:23 am

    Love love LOVE!!! Big fancy degrees don’t common sense make. Great story!

    Reply
    • Philip Town says

      January 2, 2022 at 9:22 pm

      They do not, Trudi – so true. Thanks for the kind words.

      Reply
  6. Lucas Miguel Hernandezs says

    December 23, 2021 at 11:03 pm

    I just finished reading this story three times in a row and each time I found it even more funny! This really was a great read.

    Reply
    • Philip Town says

      January 2, 2022 at 9:23 pm

      I’ve just read your comment three times in a row, Lucas … and I’m very grateful for the positive words!

      Reply
  7. Gary+Little says

    February 9, 2022 at 9:18 pm

    It’s called common sense. It doesn’t come with a degree, and sometimes degrees indicate a lack of common sense.

    Well written, Phil.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      June 19, 2022 at 10:39 pm

      Thanks very much, Gary!

      Reply
  8. Frank Daly says

    June 27, 2022 at 12:57 pm

    Excellent and funny. Well done Phil.

    Reply
    • Phil Town says

      August 8, 2022 at 7:01 pm

      Thanks, Frank!

      Reply
  9. Sarah says

    December 8, 2022 at 10:58 pm

    I laughed out loud. Don’t all married couples squabble about bills and housework?! It’s universal.

    Reply

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