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Ghost Man

October 21, 2022 by Fall Writing Contest 2022 Leave a Comment

This story is by Charm Harris and was part of our 2022 Fall Writing Contest. You can find all the writing contest stories here.

Ghost Man

“Run!” Nick yelled over his shoulder. Shana palmed her stomach like a basketball

praying her little girl wasn’t bouncing in her stomach as her feet slammed against the

dried leaves and dirt.

“I’m sinking,” Daniel yelled. Shana spun on the heel of her sneaker still holding her

stomach. She leaned forward as a sharp pain soared from one side of her stomach to the

other. Shana clenched her teeth and inhaled deeply as she stumbled towards the dense

tree line and picked up a long branch.

“Give it to me, Shana,” Nick grabbed the long thin branch with both hands. “Grab this,

and I’ll pull you out.” Daniel grabbed the end of the branch with both hands.

“Hurry,” Shana screamed. “We have to get him out of there.” Nick groaned as he

pulled the end of the branch with all of his might. “Hurry, Nicky the branch is cracking.”

Shana inhaled deeply and forced herself to stand upright as she moved toward Nick. Her

sneakers felt like they were sinking in the mud.

Crackle. Crackle. Snap.

“I love you, Cardinal.” Daniel gasped. The last thing Shana saw was his mask.

***********************************

Twelve Years Later

“Happy Birthday and Happy Halloween, Aliyah,” Shana forced herself to smile. She

carried a tray with pancakes and a small glass of fresh squeezed orange juice. Shana

swallowed the lump in her throat as she glanced around Daniel’s old bedroom. She

suddenly realized moving into the house her husband grew up in was going to be harder

then she thought. Shana was haunted by memories of her husband. The bookshelf was

filled with model trains that he put together. Even the faded blue curtains covered with

trains filled her mind with memories of Daniel.

“Mom, do you believe dad is here with us?” Shana shook her head slowly.

“I believe your dad is in Heaven.” Shana blinked away tears as she watched her

daughter enjoying her husband’s favorite breakfast. She switched off the nightstand light.

“Did you sleep with the light on?” Aliyah’s mother was sad, and it scared her. She decided

not to tell her mom the reason she slept with the nightstand light on. It would only upset

her more. Aliyah shoved a fork full of pancakes into her mouth.

“It’s no wonder he became a Train Conductor,” Shana sighed as she glanced around

the room and picked up the empty tray.

“He was the best Train Conductor,” Aliyah’s smile was warm. The love in her eyes

brightened Shana’s mood. She turned and walked out of the room.

As soon as the door closed, Aliyah leaped out of bed, and raced to the window. She

pulled the string and the metal slats on the blind opened letting in warm rays of sun. She

spun on her heel and walked to her bed. Aliyah tossed the pillow onto the floor, and

pulled the sheet, blanket, and comforter up to the edge of the mattress. She spun on her

heel again and stopped in her tracks. Her mouth dropped open. She wanted to scream,

but no sound came out.

“Don’t be afraid,” the Ghost Man whispered as he placed his fingers against his mask.

“I would never hurt you.” Aliyah remained frozen in place. Her eyes met his, and she

slowly let out the breath she was holding.

“Who are you?” Aliyah asked her eyes fixed on his. She was afraid that if she blinked

her eyes, he would disappear. His smile was kind. “My name is Aliyah.” Ghost Man

nodded as if her already knew her name. “What’s your name?” The sound of squeaking

hinges made Aliyah turn her head toward the door. Her eyes grew wide when her mother

swung the door open and bolted into the room.

“MOM!” Aliyah gasped.

“Who were you talking to?” Shana demanded. Aliyah wondered what she should tell

her mother. “I’m waiting.” Aliyah let out a long sigh.

“I was talking to Ghost Man,” Aliyah looked toward the foot of her bed where he stood

before he disappeared.

“Ghost Man?” Shana glanced around the room.

“I knew you wouldn’t believe me,” Aliyah plopped down onto her bed and folded her

arms across her chest. “That’s why I slept with the light on last night.”

“I’m going to ask Amy to come over and cleanse this house,” Shana reached into her

back pocket, pulled out her cell phone, and tapped the screen.

“No, Mom,” Aliyah yelled. “I want to find out who he is.”

“That’s insane, Aliyah, what if he’s a demon…it is Halloween.”

“I know it’s Halloween, but he’s not a demon,” Aliyah insisted. “Please, Mom, don’t call

Aunt Amy.” Aliyah knew that look all too well. Her mother was going to call her sister the

great Psychic Medium.

“You should come with me downstairs,” Shana said. Aliyah knew by her tone that

protesting would be useless.

“I’ll be down in a few minutes, okay?” Aliyah bit her bottom lip. She rose slowly from

her bed after her mother reluctantly nodded in agreement. After the door closed, Aliyah

stomped over to the small closet door. She swung it open and peered at the shoe boxes on

the top shelf. Aliyah spun around hoping to find something that would help her reach the

boxes. She dragged a chair across the carpet into the closet. She placed one foot in the

center of the chair and pulled herself up. She reached for the shoe box on the bottom of

the shelf directly in front of her.

Aliyah jumped off the chair and sat down. She closed her eyes and blew a thin layer of

dust from the edges of the shoe box before she removed the lid. When she opened her

eyes and looked down into the shoe box a wide smile formed on her lips.

“Photographs, how perfect,” Aliyah pulled out the first stack of three and began to look

through the Polaroid pictures. Aliyah recognized her grandparents. She didn’t recognize

the little boy in pajamas with trains on them.

******************************

Aliyah grabbed the sides of her head with her hands and groaned after going through

seven boxes. “The only thing I have seen so far is Grandma and Grandpa aging as the

little boy grew up.” Aliyah sighed and hesitated before opening the last box. Frustrated,

tears filled her eyes as she tossed the cardboard lid onto the floor. She picked up the

picture on top of the first stack of photographs taken with a 35mm camera. Aliyah leaped

to her feel and raced to the bedroom door. When Aliyah swung the door open, she

screamed.

“Aunt Amy, how did you get here so fast?” Aliyah blinked. A thick stream of tears

flowed down her cheeks. ‘It’s not too late.’ She thought.

“It appears as though I arrived just in time,” Amy raised her arm, and pushed her

way into the bedroom. “I feel a strong energy in this room.” Shana gasped.

“You have to listen to me,” Aliyah begged. She extended her hand holding the

photograph towards her mother. “It’s him, Mom, and he’s with you. You’re wearing

Halloween costumes. You’re pregnant and wearing a red sweat suit with a large stuffed

cardinal sitting on your shoulder. The Train Conductor wearing the white mask is Ghost

Man.” Shana’s hand shook uncontrollably as she reached for the photograph.

“Kids were chasing us with a chain saw…it was a stupid prank that cost Daniel his life,”

Shana shook her head. “Aliyah…Ghost Man is your father,” Shana stared at the

photograph and sobbed.

“I’m going to start the ritual,” Amy threw her hand into the air. “This is ridiculous. It’s

Halloween and Aliyah had most likely made friends with some demonic force.”

“No,” Shana grabbed her sister’s arm. “I have to see him.”

“Mom, look by the foot of my bed,” Aliyah said without looking in her mother’s

direction.

“It is Daniel. A demon couldn’t mimic his loving smile,” Amy wrapped her arm around

Shana and pulled her toward the foot of the bed.

“Why can’t I see him?” Shana’s head turned quickly from side to side.

“Believe,” Amy said.

“Hello Dad,” Aliyah said. “It’s so nice to meet you.”

“Hello Aliyah,” Daniel smiled as he removed his mask. “Hello Cardinal.”

“I see you, but you appear transparent,” Shana took a step forward.

“He’s not transparent because we can’t see through him, Mom,” Aliyah grabbed her

mother’s hand. “Please stay with us.” Aliyah pleaded with her father.

“I’ve been with you and your mother since the day you were born,” Aliyah’s Dad, Ghost

Man, opened his arms. Shana and Aliyah stepped into Ghost Man’s arms. Shana closed

her eyes as she tried to imagine that she could feel his tender touch once again. “I will

never leave you.” Aliyah smiled.

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